Question

【題目】書面表達（15分）

某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。請根據(jù)下表提示，以“The changes in my hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇90詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。

過去	道路狹窄、骯臟，垃圾遍地。人們居住在很小的舊房子里。他們過去常常在空閑時間聽廣播或看電視。
現(xiàn)在	在過去的幾年中，我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了很大變化。道路寬闊、干凈，兩邊有許多綠樹。大多數(shù)人已經(jīng)搬進了新公寓。此外，大多數(shù)家庭有了電腦。 許多家庭甚至有了自己的小汽車。人們正享受舒適的生活。
將來	希望……（至少一點）

The changes in my hometown

Answer 1

【答案】

In the past， my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old. Pollution was very serious. There was rubbish everywhere.

Now， great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. People live a better life. Their houses are large ad bright. Many people have owned cars. Every year， thousands of tourists from all over the world come to visit our city.

I hope we can how wider roads and more sports courts .I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構思好文章的結構，可按照時間順序來寫，注意要點的齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結構清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有許多實用的表達方式Now， great changes have taken place in my hometown.現(xiàn)在，家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了巨大的改變。Take place發(fā)生； more and more beautiful越來越漂亮； thousands of成千上萬； all over the world世界各地；better and better越來越好；in the future 在將來；等等。