Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)：

假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Mike得知你們開(kāi)展了“做生態(tài)小公民，建設(shè)美麗家鄉(xiāng)”的活動(dòng)，他來(lái)信表示很感興趣并想了解具體細(xì)節(jié)，請(qǐng)給Mike寫一封回信向他描述你（們）曾經(jīng)做過(guò)的一件事或參與的一次活動(dòng)。

要求：

(1) 內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括活動(dòng)或事件的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過(guò)程和你的感受：

(2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名：詞數(shù)80~100。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Milk,

I’m glad to hear that you are interessted in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological eitizen(生態(tài)公民)，we did a good job. Last

Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours．

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good iob. Last Sunday,I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping. And they alsoknew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day.

Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。