Question

6．中國是自行車大國．因為與小汽車相比，自行車有很多優(yōu)點(diǎn)，騎自行車上學(xué)也是中學(xué)生最喜愛的方式之一．但每年因騎自行車而引起的中學(xué)生傷亡的交通事故也有很多．請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合所學(xué)知識寫一篇70短文，談?wù)勻T自行車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)及怎樣保證騎行安全．

Bicycle
Tips（建議）	Advantage（優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
wear bicycle helmets； wear light-colored clothes； have lights on… learn more traffic rules； traffic signals； first aid	easy to park； cheap good exercise； save energy be good for don't cause pollution；

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①It's good to learn more about  traffic signals and first aid．了解交通信號和急救知識是好的．句子中be good to do sth表示做某事是好的．
②If we follow these suggestions，we will be safer．如果我們遵循這些建議，我們會更安全．句子中if引導(dǎo)一個條件狀語從句，主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．

解答 Bicycle
The bicycle is one of the most important vehicles in the world．（引出話題）It has many advantages．It's cheap and easy to park bicycles．Bicycle riding can help us save energy and it is good for the environment because bicycle doesn't cause air pollution．Bicycle riding is also good exercise．It helps people become fit and makes the riders'hearts and lungs strong．（騎自行車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
Bicycle is becoming more and more popular with the students，but every year many students get hurt in bicycle accidents．So first of all，we should obey the traffic rules．when we ride a bicycle，we should wear a helmet．If we ride a bicycle at night，we'd better wear light-colored clothes or have lights on our bicycle．It's good to learn more about  traffic signals and first aid（高分句型）．If we follow these suggestions，we will be safer．（高分句型）（怎樣保證騎行安全）

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