Question

【題目】寫作
隨著全球環(huán)境的惡化，越來越多的人選擇過低碳生活。請寫一篇英語短文，倡議你的同學(xué)們加入低碳一族。要點如下：
1節(jié)約用水、用電、用紙；
2去超市自備購物袋；
3不要購買不必要的衣服；
4不要購買一次性的杯子和碗筷；
5步行或騎自行車上學(xué)。
注意：1詞數(shù)80詞左右。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。）
2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
With theglobal warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low carbon life forthe purpose of reducing greenhouse gases.

Answer 1

【答案】With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases.
We'd better save much water and paper and electricity. We should use less carbon and oil. It's important to turn off the lights and computers when you leave the room. We should take our own bags instead of using plastic bags from the supermarket. We can buy few clothes which are unnecessary. We shouldn't buy or use one off cups or chopsticks or bowls. It's good for us to walk or take bikes to school instead of taking cars. We can also plant more trees.
Let's take action and be low carbon people!
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