Question

假如你是李華，3月18日你校舉行了“科技節(jié)”展示活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給你的筆友Mike寫(xiě)一封郵件，介紹本次活動(dòng)的情況。詞數(shù)：90-100詞。

活動(dòng)目的	提高實(shí)踐技能、培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神
活動(dòng)準(zhǔn)備	學(xué)生們結(jié)成小組、選擇活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目、進(jìn)行實(shí)驗(yàn)研究
展示內(nèi)容	1. 從高處扔雞蛋，雞蛋仍完好無(wú)損；2. 紙做的橋上能站人；3. ……
活動(dòng)感受	……

Dear Mike,
In your last e-mail, you asked me about the Science and Technology Festival in our school. I’m glad to tell you about it.________________________________________________________
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I’m looking forward to learning about your school life.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mike,
In your last e-mail, you asked me about the Science and Technology Festival in our school. I’m glad to tell you about it.
The goal of this activity was to improve students’ practice skills and develop team spirit. At the beginning of the festival, we got ready for it. We formed groups, chose programs and then began doing research and experiments. Finally it was time to show the amazing results. For example, the egg was thrown from high places, but it wasn’t broken and was still complete. People could stand on the bridge made of paper. Some students even made a robot to do their homework.
From the activity, I realized the importance of team work and was amazed by the charm of science and technology. I found my new interest in science.
I’m looking forward to learning about your school life.
Yours,
Li Hua

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【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如it was time to show the amazing result，Some students even made a robot to do their homework.，I realized the importance of team work and was amazed by the charm of science and technology. I found my new interest in science..等。From the activity.等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。