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1．王老師是一位英語(yǔ)老師，40歲左右，身材高大，有些發(fā)胖，戴眼鏡．

2．在數(shù)學(xué)方面，經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富，對(duì)學(xué)生：和工作要求嚴(yán)格．

3．王老師樂(lè)于助人，在她的幫助下，學(xué)生：的英語(yǔ)提高很快．

4．詞數(shù)80～100詞．

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學(xué)生：習(xí)作： What a Good Teacher 　　Miss Wang is my English teacher. She's about forty years old. She's always putting on(X1) a pair of glasses. She's tall and fat, she looks very strict, but in fact, she's very friendly to us students. She's one of the most popular teachers in our school. She teaches our English(X2) so well that we all love her. 　　Miss Wang is always ready to help us with our studies. Look. She's helping a student over there. She often tells us how to learn English well and tells us(X3) the best way to remember new words. She also likes us to ask all kinds of questions. 　　Miss Wang is very strict in us(X4) and works rather hard. She often works till midnight. Usually, we have a dictation twice a week and she always check our answers very carefully. She even makes us(X5) preview all the new lessons in Book Three. 　　What a good kind teacher Miss Wang is! 　　剖析：1．wear表示“穿戴”的狀態(tài)，用于一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表示經(jīng)常的穿戴情況，用于進(jìn)行時(shí)表示暫時(shí)的穿戴情況，而put on是表示“穿”的動(dòng)作，試比較： 　　He wears a blue shirt．他(經(jīng)常)穿藍(lán)襯衫． 　　He is wearing a blue shirt．他(此刻)穿著藍(lán)襯衫． 　　He is putting on a blue shirt．他(正在)穿(上)一件藍(lán)襯衫． 　　此外“穿、戴”的賓語(yǔ)可以是hat、coat、trousers、shoes、socks、glasses、necklace、watch、flower，此文中的王老師天天戴眼鏡，強(qiáng)調(diào)的是狀態(tài)，所以putting on要改為wearing． 　　2．“teach sb sth．”是固定短語(yǔ)，意為“教某人做某事”，應(yīng)用賓格us． 　　3．此處的tell us與前面重復(fù)，可省略． 　　4．“be strict in”是“對(duì)某事嚴(yán)格(要求)”，而“對(duì)人(要求)嚴(yán)格”應(yīng)用with． 　　5．make有“迫使”的意味，因此此處應(yīng)改為asks us to(do)． 　　總評(píng)：此文通過(guò)對(duì)王老師輔導(dǎo)學(xué)生：與努力工作兩件事的描寫(xiě)，表達(dá)出作者對(duì)老師的崇敬與愛(ài)戴之情，作者較好地運(yùn)用了主題句及所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)、句型和語(yǔ)法，第一段的肖像描寫(xiě)也很成功，全文表達(dá)較為順暢，但應(yīng)注意同義詞用法的辨析．