Question

Write a passage in about 100 words with the help of the following points about Zhanghua’s life       change. The first sentence has been given.

 

Zhanghua as a child	Zhuanghua now
used to have much time used to spend a lot of time playing games with his friends used to watch TV or chat with his grandma in the evening used to go to concerts with his father.	Is too busy gets up early and stays in school all day. hasn't any more time to play games with his does his homework and goes to bed late, hardly has time for concerts. misses the old days.

Zhuanghua's life has changed a lot in the last few years.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Zhuanghua's life has changed a lot in the last few years. In the past, he used to have much time to play after school. He spent a lot of time playing games with his friends. When he finished his homework, he often watched TV or chatted with his grandma. On Saturday, he often went to concerts with his father.

But now his school life has changed a lot. He is very busy every day. He has to get up early and stays in school all day. Because he has to study hard. He hasn’t any more time to play games with his friends. He has to do his homework and goes to bed late every night. He hardly has any time for concerts. He misses the old days very much.

【解析】 【寫作思路】

一.審題。

本文體裁為兼有一般過去式和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)的記敘文，要介紹Zhang Hua 生活的變化。

    二．寫作要點：

1．過去的生活。

2. 現(xiàn)在的生活

3. 時態(tài)的變化

三． 關(guān)鍵短語和句型

used to，spend a lot of time playing games，gets up early， miss the old days.

He spent a lot of time playing games with his friends.

But now his school life has changed a lot. He has to get up early and stays in school all day.