Question

看圖完成短文

根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容和所給詞語完成一篇短文．

要求：1．詞數(shù)在80個左右．

2．把圖中所示內(nèi)容表達(dá)完整，用上所給詞語，條理清晰，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點正確．

3．短文第一句已給出．

所給詞語：bed, until, twelve, get up, this morning, hurry, without breakfast, get, late for class, when, ask, question, not answer, back home, can't, homework, feel sorry, decide, watch, too much

Tom watched TV too late last night. ________________________________

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思路分析：中考英語試卷的書面表達(dá)是看圖完成短文，它要求考生根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容和所給詞語完成一篇短文．考生應(yīng)善于觀察，善于調(diào)整自己的思路，善于捕捉畫面的信息點．考生對所寫畫面內(nèi)容要做到細(xì)致觀察和分析，抓住事物的實質(zhì)和特點，將這些觀察所得到的信息牢牢記在心里．在觀察時，要善于抓住事物在不同畫面所呈現(xiàn)的不同形式和變化，具有豐富的想像力，抓住事物的特征進(jìn)行描述．下面談?wù)勥@篇書面表達(dá)的寫作步驟： 　�、瘢�了解提示：，明確要求，瀏覽各圖 　　做這篇書面表達(dá)題，首先要按照提示：和要求，迅速瀏覽各圖，撲捉畫面信息，確定表達(dá)方向．本篇書面表達(dá)是關(guān)于一位名叫Tom的學(xué)生夜間看電視時間過長，睡覺晚，起床遲，連早飯都不吃匆忙上學(xué)，上課遲到，課堂上回答不出老師提出的問題，回家不會做作業(yè)，得到教訓(xùn)下決心今后不再太多地看電視的故事． 　�、颍�理出重點，列出要點 　　根據(jù)畫面內(nèi)容，列出要表達(dá)的要點，這樣可避免遺漏主要內(nèi)容或表達(dá)文不對題． 　　1．看電視到太晚，夜間12點才就寢　　2．起床晚，不吃飯匆忙去上學(xué)　　3．到校遲，上課遲到　　4．老師提問題，答不出來　　5．回家不會做作業(yè)　　6．很難過，決心不太多地看電視 　　Ⅲ．將要點譯成英語，為展開全文的寫作勾畫出構(gòu)架 　　要點可用單詞、詞組、短語或不完整的句子等方式來表達(dá)，盡量用上所給詞語，這只是為完成規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)用英語思維的開始． 　　1．watch TV too late; not to go to bed until twelve 　　2．get up late; hurry to school without breakfast 　　3．get to school late; be late for class 　　4．a(chǎn)sk Tom a question; not answer 　　5．go back home; can't do homework 　　6．feel sorry; decide not to watch TV too much 　�、簦�?dāng)U展要點成句，把主要內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚 　　這一步要注意人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)和句型結(jié)構(gòu)． 　　1．Tom watched TV too late. He didn't go to bed until twelve o'clock. 　　2．He got up very late. He Hurried to school without breakfast. 　　3．He got to school late. He was late for class. 　　4．The teacher asked Tom a question, He couldn't answer it. 　　5．He went back home. He couldn't do his homework. 　　6．He felt sorry. He decided not to watch TV too much. 　�、酰�豐富要點內(nèi)容，增加描述細(xì)節(jié) 這一步要依照畫面內(nèi)容合理想像，圍繞要點增添必要細(xì)節(jié)．適當(dāng)使用較高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，以表現(xiàn)出較強(qiáng)的語言應(yīng)用能力． 　　1．Tom watched TV too late last night. He didn't go to bed until twelve o'clock. 　　2．He got up very late this morning. He hurried to school without breakfast. 　　3．He got to school at eight fifteen. He was late for class. 　　4．In class the teacher asked Tom a question. He couldn't answer it. 　　5．Tom got back home from school. He couldn't do his homework. 　　6．Tom felt sorry for it. He decided not to watch TV too much. 　�、觯�注意體裁格式，組句謀篇成文 　　書面表達(dá)要求體裁格式和題目的要求保持一致．組句謀篇時要盡量準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用詞匯、短語和句型結(jié)構(gòu)，增加必要的細(xì)節(jié)，根據(jù)句子的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系或描述情況的失后順序，合理調(diào)整句型，重新排列句子．語句間使用必要的過渡詞，以表達(dá)時間、事情發(fā)生的先后順序及并列、遞進(jìn)、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系．全文要做到內(nèi)容要點齊全，語言準(zhǔn)確無誤，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊表達(dá)連貫，完成了試題所規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)． 　　One possible version(范文)： 　　Tom watched TV too late last night, He didn't go to bed until twelve o'clock. He got up very late this morning and hurried to school without breakfast. He got to school at eight fifteen and was late for class. In class the teacher asked Tom a question, but he couldn't answer it. When he got back home from school, Tom couldn't do his homework. He felt sorry for it and decided not to watch TV too much. [答案] [提示內(nèi)容] [詳解內(nèi)容]