Question

假定上周六晚上，你們?nèi)�家在一家飯店就餐。�?qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示．用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)，并適當(dāng)加以評(píng)論。

要點(diǎn)提示：

(1)鄰桌年輕人大聲說(shuō)笑、吸煙。

(2)你請(qǐng)他們不要那樣做。

(3)他們不聽(tīng)，反而嘲笑你。

(4)你認(rèn)為：①他們?cè)诠�共�?chǎng)所那樣做是不對(duì)的。

②年輕人是天津的未來(lái)，應(yīng)該……

參考詞匯：嘲笑laugh at

要求：

(1)詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。

(2)短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. ____________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. We were enjoying ourselves when something disturbing happened. A group of young people were sitting at the table nearby. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked cigarettes, making the restaurant full of noise and smoke. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.

In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, one should keep quite and not affect others when in public. Therefore it’s completely bad behavior to do that in the restaurant. What’s more, we should always watch our manners and pay attention to public morality, as young people are the future of Tianjin.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較簡(jiǎn)略，故動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，根據(jù)材料組織內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作中注意重點(diǎn)介紹事情的發(fā)生經(jīng)過(guò)，并對(duì)此評(píng)論，表達(dá)自己的看法。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文在敘述事情經(jīng)過(guò)時(shí)，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)或者將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。本文人稱較為復(fù)雜，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。