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【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的漢語提示,以“My Favourite Season—Winter”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

1. 我的家鄉(xiāng)經(jīng)常下雪;

2. 我喜歡在下雪時(shí)和朋友們堆雪人、打雪仗;

3. 我認(rèn)為冬季是一年中最好的季節(jié)。

My Favourite Season—Winter

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Answer 1

【答案】My Favourite Season—Winter

Winter is full of fun. ② It often snows in my hometown. There is snow everywhere. I like to ski on the snow. Sometimes my friends and I make a snowman. ① We use a_ carrot_ as① the snowman's nose. We put a scarf on snowman's _neck. ① Sometimes we make snowballs① and throw them to each other. ④ Everything looks white. All the people have a good time⑤ in the snow. I think winter is the best season of the year. I_ like winter！②

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，采用“主要特征法”描寫季節(jié), 首先介紹描寫的季節(jié)是什么；然后具體說明這個(gè)季節(jié)的天氣特點(diǎn)以及所從事的活動(dòng)；最后表達(dá)自己的感情。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意人稱和一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中使用了①重點(diǎn)詞匯和句型的應(yīng)用：make a snowman；use. . . as; put. . . on；make snowballs ②用Winter is full of fun. 引領(lǐng)全文, I like winter！結(jié)尾,前后呼應(yīng) ,結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。