Question

5．假如你是Xiaoming，在這三年的學習生活中，你遇到了很多老師，現(xiàn)在請你選擇其中對你幫助最大的一位老師（假如是Miss Wang），給她寫一封不少于80詞的感謝信，談談你對她的印象，回憶她是怎么幫助你的，并表達你對她的祝福．信的開頭和落款已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
提示詞：feeling，kind，help，encourage，thanks，expectations（期望），hope
Dear Miss Wang：
I'm glad to write to you．
                                                                                       
Yours，
Xiaoming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：I can clearly remember how much I hated learning new English words at first．我清楚地記得我起初多么討厭學英語單詞．這是一個賓語從句，從句要用陳述語序，how much多少，通常修飾不可數(shù)名詞．hate doing sth討厭某種行為．習慣性動作．a(chǎn)t first首先．
句型二：Little by little，my interest in English grew and now I'm a top student in English．漸漸地，我對英語的興趣越來越大，現(xiàn)在我成了英語尖子生．Little by little漸漸地，作狀語．my interest的興趣，in English用英語，介詞短語做后置定語．now時間狀語，I'm我是．a(chǎn) top student尖子生．

解答 Dear Miss Wang，
I'm glad to write to you．At this moment，words can no longer express my feelings．（問候）How kind and responsible can a teacher be？You just gave me the perfect answer．I can clearly remember how much I hated learning new English words at first【高分句型一】．To be honest，I really wanted to give up（英語很難）．As soon as you noticed this，you offered to help me by telling me some good ways to learn them．You never failed to encourage me even when I made only a little progress．（鼓勵我）Little by little，my interest in English grew and now I'm a top student in English【高分句型二】．I want to say thanks to you．（感謝）I will work harder in the future to live up to your expectations．I hope you can be happy and healthy forever．（祝福）
Yours
Xiaoming

點評 寫作時要明確要點，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢，語法正確，結合要求，注意作文題材，不要寫跑題．日常積累一些短語和詞句．