Question

19．假如你是Richard，今天是父親節(jié)．請(qǐng)給爸爸寫(xiě)一封信．信的內(nèi)容必須包括如下兩點(diǎn)：①表達(dá)對(duì)爸爸的祝福和感謝；②給出至少兩個(gè)理由說(shuō)服爸爸同意你毎夭打半個(gè)小時(shí)的籃球
要求：
（1）信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和姓名．
（2）條理清楚，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確：
（3）60-80個(gè)單詞，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Dad，
Today is Father's Day．
I hope you are happy and healthy every day．Thank you for everything you have done for me．
I know you are worried about my study，so you don't want me to play basketball too much．But I can't study all day long，Sometimes I need to relax．I really enjoy playing basketball．It keeps me healthy．
Could you allow me to play basketball for half an hour every day？I promise I will try my best in my study．
Yours，
Richard．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封在父親節(jié)寫(xiě)給父親的一封信，首先仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息．利用句型Thank you for everything you have done for me．寫(xiě)出了對(duì)父親的"愛(ài)"，還運(yùn)用了Could you allow me to play basketball for half an hour every day？這樣的句子，委婉得提出了請(qǐng)求，最后表達(dá)了自己的決心和打算，讓自己的父親放心自己的學(xué)習(xí)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．

解答 Dear Dad，
Today is Father's Day．I hope you are happy and healthy every day．Thank you for everything you have done for me．
I know you are worried about my study，so you don't want me to play basketball too much．But I can't study all day long，Sometimes I need to relax．I really enjoy playing basketball．It keeps me healthy．
Could you allow me to play basketball for half an hour every day？I promise I will try my best in my study．
Yours，
Richard

點(diǎn)評(píng) 文章語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，條理清楚，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，時(shí)態(tài)恰當(dāng)，是一篇優(yōu)秀習(xí)作．