Question

19．假如你名叫He Cong，在即將畢業(yè)之際，你的英語老師Mr．Smith要求你們每人給他寫一封英文書信作紀念．   
    要點提示：
 1．對Mr．Smith的印象：總是工作努力：有困難時盡力幫助我們．
    2．簡述一次經歷：你開始學英語時無論如何努力都學不好；在你幾乎要放棄時，他發(fā)現了你的問題；他與你進行了一次如何學英語的談話；他從此不斷幫助你；你對英語感興趣了；你現在英語學得好．'
    3．你的感受：很幸運作他的學生．
    要求：
    1．詞數：l00左右（信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）．
    2．所有的要點提示必須涉及，可適當添加內容．
    3．字跡工整，卷面整潔，語言流暢．
    4．不得用真實姓名、校名、地名．     
    參考詞語：try to help，have atalk，do well in，luck
Dear Mr．Smith，
How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soonBut I really want to say thank you very much．And I won't forget you．You are a handsome，friendly and clever teacher．You are always hard-working and strict．When we have problems，you usually help us at once．
I still remember you tried to help me，when I started to learn english．I really thought it very difficult．And I tried a lot，but I couldn't get good grade．So I decided to give it up．At this time，you had a talk with me about how to learn English．Since then you helped me all the time．And I began to take interest in english．Now，I do well in English．So I feel very lucky to be your student．I have learned a lot from you．For example，I will help others when they are in trouble．
Best wishes to you!
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給出寫作要點的提綱作文．內容為在畢業(yè)之際給老師的一封信，寫作要點是 1．對Mr．Smith的印象． 2．簡述一次經歷3．你的感受，時態(tài)為一般現在時，一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱和第二人稱．
常用到的重點句型和短語：hard-working勤奮的，try to do sth盡力去做某事，give up放棄，all the time一直，take interest in對…感興趣等等

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon．But I really want to say thank you very much．And I won't forget you．You are a handsome，friendly and clever teacher．You are always hard-working and strict．When we have problems，you usually help us at once．（對Mr．Smith的印象）
I still remember you tried to help me，when I started to learn english．I really thought it very difficult．And I tried a lot，but I couldn't get good grade．So I decided to give it up．．（高分句型）At this time，you had a talk with me about how to learn English．Since then you helped me all the time．And I began to take interest in english．Now，I do well in English．（簡述一次經歷）  So I feel very lucky to be your student．I have learned a lot from you．For example，（高分句型）I will help others when they are in trouble．（我的感受）
Best wishes to you!
Yours
He Cong

點評 這是一篇給出寫作要點的提綱類作文．考生需根據所給題目及要點展開作文．可先從最基本的詞匯入手，然后組詞成句，考生需特別注意英語的表達習慣，使文章看起來條理更清晰，語句更連貫