Question

13．假如你是Bob，請根據(jù)下面的提示給你的筆友Linda寫一封信．
1．早上6點半起床，然后刷牙，吃早飯．
2.7點鐘坐公交車去上學．
3．學校離家有5公里遠，要花10分鐘才能到達學校．
4．早上8點開始上課．在學校，我必須要遵守規(guī)則．
5．放學后，我要去練習彈吉他．因為我想要加入音樂俱樂部．
要求：語言通順，意思連貫．不能遺漏要點，60詞左右．
Dear Linda，
       ．
Yours，Bob．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
It takes me about 10 minutes to get to school，classes begin at 8 in the morning．我早上要花10分鐘才能到達學校．這是It takes sb．some time to do sth．花費某人多長時間做某事．
高分句型二
I often practice playing the guitar，because I want to join the music club．我經(jīng)常練習彈吉他，因為我想加入音樂俱樂部．這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，因為…．

解答 Dear Linda，
How is it going？Now I will tell you something about my life．【開頭點明主題】I get up at 6：30 in the morning，then I brush my teeth and have breakfast，I go to school by bus at 7 o'clock．My school is 5 kilometers away from home．It takes me about 10 minutes to get to school，classes begin at 8 in the morning【高分句型一，注意It takes sb．some time to do sth．的使用】．At school，I have to obey the rules，after school，I often practice playing the guitar，because I want to join the music club【高分句型二，注意狀語從句的使用】．【正文部分詳細介紹自己的學校生活】
What do you think of my school life，see you soon．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】
Yours，
Bob．

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．