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18．1．在我們的成長(zhǎng)過程中，父母為我們付出了很多．我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)感恩，學(xué)會(huì)讓父母放心，讓父母開心．請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以I Love My Parents為題，寫一篇短文．字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右．
1．生活上，我們應(yīng)該…；2．學(xué)習(xí)上，我們應(yīng)該…；
3．交友上，我們應(yīng)該…；4．在家里，我們可以…．
注意：1．可適當(dāng)增減內(nèi)容，使短文意思完整、連貫．
2．書寫規(guī)范，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名．
I Love My Parents
It's really hard for parents to bring up their kids．So it is important for us to learn to be thankful．First，we should learn to be independent in our daily lives．And starting good habits may make parents happy．As we know，our study always worries parents，so what we need do is to study hard and be better students．As for friends，we should let them know who are our friends and what we do together．Also，we are supposed to help with housework more often．Then parents will have more time to relax．Parents'love is the most valuable in the world．So it's our duty to show our love to our family and make them happy．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：So it is important for us to learn to be thankful所以學(xué)會(huì)感恩是很重要的．it是形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式．
高分句型二：Also，we are supposed to help with housework more often此外，我們應(yīng)該更多地幫助做家務(wù)．be supposed to do sth．理應(yīng)做某事．

解答 I Love My Parents
It's really hard for parents to bring up their kids．So it is important for us to learn to be thankful．（高分句型一）First，we should learn to be independent in our daily lives．And starting good habits may make parents happy．（生活上）As we know，our study always worries parents，so what we need do is to study hard and be better students．（學(xué)習(xí)上）As for friends，we should let them know who are our friends and what we do together．（交友上）Also，we are supposed to help with housework more often．（高分句型二）（在家里）Then parents will have more time to relax．Parents'love is the most valuable in the world．So it's our duty to show our love to our family and make them happy．

點(diǎn)評(píng) （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動(dòng)詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．