Question

6．目前中學(xué)生早餐問題已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)關(guān)注，你所在學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)在5月20日"全國(guó)學(xué)生營(yíng)養(yǎng)日"開展問卷調(diào)查，其結(jié)果令人擔(dān)憂．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文，倡導(dǎo)營(yíng)養(yǎng)早餐．

學(xué)生比例	早餐情況	健康狀況
55%	有規(guī)律地吃早餐	身體健康，精力充沛
25%	吃垃圾食品	營(yíng)養(yǎng)不均衡
20%	沒有吃早餐	感到饑餓，上課無(wú)法認(rèn)真聽講，容易生病

提示詞：regularly，active，junk food（垃圾食品），a balanced diet，as a result
要求：
（1）所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所提供的信息，并發(fā)表自己的看法．
（2）所給的提示詞必須全部用上，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
（3）字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右．文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its important．Here's the result of our survey．About 55percent of the studentshave breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．（It is bad for their health．） 20 percent （of the students） go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．
It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇圖表作文，要求是根據(jù)你所在學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)在5月20日"全國(guó)學(xué)生營(yíng)養(yǎng)日"開展的問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文，倡導(dǎo)營(yíng)養(yǎng)早餐．寫作內(nèi)容要根據(jù)吃早餐的情況，分析到具體比例和形成的原因．人稱要以第三人稱they來寫，也可用到 數(shù)+percent of the students等做主語(yǔ)，由于是介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，也就是平時(shí)的情況，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

解答 Breakfast Is Important
    Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its important．Here's the result of our survey．About 55
percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．（It is bad for their health．） 20 percent （of the students） go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．
    It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．

可以借鑒的短語(yǔ)
as a result  作為結(jié)果
What's worse  更糟糕的是
keep healthy   保持健康

可以借鑒的句型：
Breakfast is important，About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．
What's worse，they get ill easily．
It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast．