Question

10．三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，你的父母親一路艱辛，在學(xué)習(xí)和生活上給予你關(guān)懷、鼓勵(lì)、支持與幫助，你心存感激．假如你的名字叫謝恩，請你給你的父母親寫一封感謝信，談?wù)勀銓λ麄兊挠∠�，回憶他們是怎么幫助你的，并表達(dá)你對他們的祝福．
提示詞：kind，help，encourage，thanks，hope．
注意：1．格式要完整、正確；詞數(shù)：60～80；書寫日期不限．
2．考生可以根據(jù)情節(jié)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和地名．
June 26
Dear father and mother，
I'm glad to write to you．
You are such kindand responsible parents that Ilove you very much．Owing to your help，Ifinished my primary study three years ago，now Iwill finish my junior middle school．I remember when Iwas Iprimary schoo，I hated going to school，and Ieven made much trouble at school．When you noticed this，you had a talk with me．You told me again and again the importance of the study and encouraged me never give up．I've made great progress in my study step by step and now I'm the top student in junior three
I wantto say thanks．I will work harder and be a useful person in the future．I hope you can be happy and healthy forever．
Yours，
Xie En．

Answer 1

分析 本文為初中畢業(yè)感謝信，寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，談?wù)勀銓λ麄兊挠∠�，�?，回憶他們是怎么幫助你的；3，表達(dá)你對他們的祝福．，

解答 June 26
Dear father and mother，
I'm glad to write to you．
You are such kind and responsible parents that I love you very much．Owing to your help，I finished my primary study three years ago，now I will finish my junior middle school．I remember when I was I primary schoo，I hated going to school，and I even made much trouble at school．When you noticed this，you had a talk with me．You told me again and again the importance of the study and encouraged me never give up．I've made great progress in my study step by step and now I'm the top student in junior three
I want to say thanks．I will work harder and be a useful person in the future．I hope you can be happy and healthy forever．
Yours，
Xie En

點(diǎn)評 考生需明確寫作意圖及寫作要點(diǎn)，讀懂題意，構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)．