Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

As we know, apologies are one of the tool that we make use of them to build good friendships and relationships. Saying you are sorry are more than just words. You are also saying that you respect the other person but care about his feelings.

Generally, a sincere apology contributes to fix everything right away. Sometimes, you may need to give the other person some time because he may take a while for someone to stop feeling upset. When someone makes apology to you, you may welcome it. And then you may finally forgive him by what he has said or has done. Therefore, if a person keeps hurting you and apologizing without making an effort to change, you may not be willingly to hang out with that person any more.

Answer 1

【答案】As we know, apologies are one of the tool that we make use of them to build good

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friendships and relationships. Saying you are sorry are more than just words. You are also saying

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person any more.

【解析】第一處錯(cuò)誤：one of the+復(fù)數(shù)名詞，故把tool改為tools。

第二處錯(cuò)誤：that we make use of是定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞tool，that作為定語(yǔ)從句的賓語(yǔ)，因此them作賓語(yǔ)，此處賓語(yǔ)重復(fù)，故把them刪去。

第三處錯(cuò)誤：動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)Saying you are sorry作主語(yǔ)，看成一個(gè)整體，謂語(yǔ)用單數(shù)，故把are改為is。

第四處錯(cuò)誤：此處you respect the other person“你尊重其他人” 和 care about his feelings“在乎他的感受”表示并列關(guān)系，故把連詞but改為and。

第五處錯(cuò)誤：contribute to doing sth.有助于做某事，故把fix改為fixing。

第六處錯(cuò)誤：根據(jù)句型It takes time to do sth做某事需要時(shí)間，故此處把代詞he改為it。

第七處錯(cuò)誤：make an apology道歉，故在make和apology之間加冠詞an。

第八處錯(cuò)誤：forgive sb for sth因?yàn)槟澄镌�諒某人，故把介詞by改為for。

第九處錯(cuò)誤：結(jié)合句意，此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折，有逗號(hào)隔開(kāi)，故把Therefore改為However。

第十處錯(cuò)誤：be willing to do sth愿意做某事，故把willingly改為willing。