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【題目】書面表達(dá)

一個(gè)民族有自己的“民族夢(mèng)”，一個(gè)國(guó)家有自己的“國(guó)家夢(mèng)”，同樣，每個(gè)人也應(yīng)有屬于自己的“美麗夢(mèng)想”。最近，你班就“我們的理想職業(yè)”展開(kāi)了一次調(diào)查。 下表是你們小組的調(diào)查情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向英語(yǔ)校刊投稿。100詞左右

組員	理想職業(yè)	原因	現(xiàn)在表現(xiàn)
Mary	教師	喜歡和孩子們一起工作，有耐心	現(xiàn)在刻苦努力,對(duì)各門功課有興趣,和老師相處好并能和老師交朋友
Kate	芭蕾舞演員 (ballet dancer)	身材苗條,擅長(zhǎng)跳舞	在空余時(shí)間將絕大部分精力投入到芭蕾舞訓(xùn)練中去
Mike	作家	愿意與別人分享精彩故事	每天堅(jiān)持讀書和寫作
你	？	？	？

Our ideal work

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

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Hopefully, everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

Answer 1

【答案】

Our ideal work

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

Mary wants to be a teacher when she grows up. She is very patient and enjoys working with children. Now, she works very hard and is interested in all the subjects. She can get along well with the teachers and make friends at school.

Kate is slim and good at dancing. She would like to be a ballet dancer in the future.She devotes most of her effort to ballet training in her spare time every day.

Mike would like to be a writer. He is willing to share his wonderful stories with others. Now he keeps reading and writing every day.

I want to be a dancer because I like dancing very much. I practice dancing every day.

Hopefully, everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。同時(shí)針對(duì)個(gè)人的真實(shí)情況與短文的要求進(jìn)行恰當(dāng)?shù)?/span>表達(dá)，更能加強(qiáng)作品的可讀性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，沒(méi)有或基本沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。