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【題目】假設(shè)你將參加社區(qū)“英語角”，本期話題是My Good Friend，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意句意連貫。注意文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名等。

Personalities	Confident	not afraid of … / …
	Clever	new ideas…
	Hard-working	do extra work / …
Problem	like …best; not achieve a balance between…
Hero	favorite color; a heart full of love / …

My Good Friend

Answer 1

【答案】

My Good Friend

Mary is my best friend. She is thirteen. She is a very confident girl because she is not afraid of anything.and she is very clever ,for she always thinks of new ideas to ；s when we have difficulty in our everyday life.

Besides, she is quite hardworking. She often works extra hours while others are playing. Her favourite lessons are English and math. She likes them best. She also likes drawing and reading after school.but she can’t achieve a balance between study and rest, so she is a little weak. However, her hero is Hawking,a famous scientist. she says she will be a scientist when she grows up. What’s more, she likes green because she has a heart full of love for nature, and she wants to work to protect many plants and animals on the earth.

This is my friend, Mary.

【解析】

試題分析： 本文要求學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)，來介紹自己的好朋友。分別介紹他的性格，問題和 他最崇拜的英雄三個(gè)方面。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】該文完全能夠依照題目要求，從三個(gè)方面著手介紹自己的好朋友。并且語言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確，思路清晰，語句連貫，不失為一篇優(yōu)秀作文。特別是使用 主從復(fù)合句這樣的長句實(shí)屬可貴。例如：She is a very confident girl because she is not afraid of anything。for she always thinks of new ideas to solve problems when we have difficulty in our everyday life.文章中的連接副詞也使用得相當(dāng)不錯(cuò)：Besides, However, What’s more,等。以及一些漂亮的短語：not afraid of；thinks of；solve problem；have difficulty in；works extra hours achieve a balance between study and rest；grows up.