Question

【題目】A最近，網(wǎng)友發(fā)起倡導厲行節(jié)約，反對浪費的“光盤行動”（Clear the Plate）,引起熱烈反響。請根據(jù)以下信息，完成句子。

1. 在家里用餐吃多少盛多少。

2. 吃光自己盤中的食物。

3. 在外就餐時將吃剩的菜打包回家。

4. 好處是：可以避免浪費，減少污染。

5. 能養(yǎng)成我們勤儉節(jié)約，愛惜糧食的好習慣。

B

A Real Friend

提示：朋友是思想上可以依賴，情感上可以依托，學習上能得到幫助，生活中能得到關照的人。請寫一，兩件事來敘述你和朋友間真摯的友情。

1. 語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名，校名。

3. 字數(shù)規(guī)定80---100。

Answer 1

【答案】

A

My opinion on clearing the plate

In modern days,more and more people get richer and richer ,and as they begin to live a happier life, they pay less attention to food-saving. Nobody worries about food and few can think of the people in hanger in the other parts of the world.Plenty of net-friends carry out a clear-the-plate action on the Internet, calling on the people to save food. It suggests that we should never only eat what we like best and advices getting suitable amount of food that we can have at home .On one hand we are told to eat up all we have on our plates. On the other hand ,when we go out for dinner, we must pack home all we didn’t finish. In this way, not only can we save a lot of food, reduce the rubbish but also we can form a good habit of saving.Let’s join in clearing the plate.

B

A real friend

I have many friends.Cherry is my real friend from Singapore,and she is a girl.She is very smart and beautiful.She likes singing,dancing and shopping.She is good at maths,English and Chinese.She often helps me out when I have problems in doing my homework,so I make a great progress in my lessons.I will never forget that I lost my heart to study last year and didn’t want to go to school,she came over to encourage me and help me with my lessons.I was deeply moved. A real friend will be of great help when you are in trouble.

【解析】

試題分析：這兩個書面表達都是命題作文，第一個作文所給材料比較詳細，第二個作文提示清晰到位。因此，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作中要注意人稱、語態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點：兩篇短文能夠根據(jù)寫作提示，較好地把與寫作相關的內(nèi)容進行歸納整合，文章內(nèi)容覆蓋所有要點，語言表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復合句，使文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢。同時，文章還使用了一些常用句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。