Question

【題目】書面表達：（15分）

昨天是母親節(jié)，你為媽媽做了一道水果沙拉。根據(jù)參考詞匯，用英語寫一篇短文，敘述你制作水果沙拉的過程。詞數(shù)在80個左右。

1. Wash different fruits and peel(剝皮);

2. Cut them and mix them up(混合);

3. Add salad, cream and stir(攪拌)

Answer 1

【答案】

Yesterday was Mother’s Day. I made a dish of fruit salad for my mom. First, I took an apple, a pear, some purple grapes, an orange and some bananas. Then I washed and peeled them. After that I cut them into small pieces and put them on the plate, and then I added some sugar, a little salad and some cream. The last thing I did was to stir and mix them up. I put the purple grapes around the plate, and my fruit salad looked more beautiful. After I finished my fruit salad, I put it on the table and sang some songs to my mom. My mom felt so happy, and I was very happy, too.

【解析】

試題分析：這一篇記敘文，在寫作記敘文時，一定要交待清楚記敘文的各大要素：who人物,what事件,when時間,where地點, why原因。本文要求敘述明天母親節(jié)為媽媽制作水果沙拉的過程，注意要用第一人稱，用一般過去時，要注意用陳述句，不要用祈使句。要寫作中按事件發(fā)生的先后進行敘述，同時在文中要透露出自己對母親的愛。

寫作亮點：本文敘述清楚，按事件的先后為序，以first，then，after that……連詞貫穿全文，層次明了。用take, wash, peel, cut into, put …on等動詞（短語）的一般過去時，表達準確。結(jié)尾“My mom felt so happy, and I was very happy, too. ”媽媽感到高興 ，我也非常高興。點明主旨，母子互愛，溢于言表。