Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)：（15分）

昨天是母親節(jié)，你為媽媽做了一道水果沙拉。根據(jù)參考詞匯，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，敘述你制作水果沙拉的過(guò)程。詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右。

1. Wash different fruits and peel(剝皮);

2. Cut them and mix them up(混合);

3. Add salad, cream and stir(攪拌)

Answer 1

【答案】

Yesterday was Mother’s Day. I made a dish of fruit salad for my mom. First, I took an apple, a pear, some purple grapes, an orange and some bananas. Then I washed and peeled them. After that I cut them into small pieces and put them on the plate, and then I added some sugar, a little salad and some cream. The last thing I did was to stir and mix them up. I put the purple grapes around the plate, and my fruit salad looked more beautiful. After I finished my fruit salad, I put it on the table and sang some songs to my mom. My mom felt so happy, and I was very happy, too.

【解析】

試題分析：這一篇記敘文，在寫作記敘文時(shí)，一定要交待清楚記敘文的各大要素：who人物,what事件,when時(shí)間,where地點(diǎn), why原因。本文要求敘述明天母親節(jié)為媽媽制作水果沙拉的過(guò)程，注意要用第一人稱，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，要注意用陳述句，不要用祈使句。要寫作中按事件發(fā)生的先后進(jìn)行敘述，同時(shí)在文中要透露出自己對(duì)母親的愛。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文敘述清楚，按事件的先后為序，以first，then，after that……連詞貫穿全文，層次明了。用take, wash, peel, cut into, put …on等動(dòng)詞（短語(yǔ)）的一般過(guò)去時(shí)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。結(jié)尾“My mom felt so happy, and I was very happy, too. ”媽媽感到高興 ，我也非常高興。點(diǎn)明主旨，母子互愛，溢于言表。