Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個月來到北京學(xué)習(xí)。十月份你將去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語演講比賽(speech contest)，你在資料搜集、語言運用等方面遇到了困難。請根據(jù)以下要點給Tom寫一封電子郵件：

1.詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；

2.談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請Tom幫忙；

3.告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

It has been a month since you studied in Beijing.How are things going these days? I'm writing to tell you that I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in October.The opportunity is of great importance for me,so I am busy making preparations for it to have a good performance.

However, I still have some difficulty in collecting useful materials.Meanwhile,I find it hard to use English properly.I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.I miss you so much that I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.

I am looking forward to the cheerful moment that we will spend together.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一封郵件，是學(xué)生非常熟悉的題材。一般現(xiàn)在時為主，文章的要點基本上都已經(jīng)給出來了，考生只需要翻譯成英文即可，在寫作時要注意使用合適的連接詞，如however; meanwhile; for one thing, for another等。同時注意使用高級詞匯結(jié)構(gòu)如of great importance等讓文章更有檔次。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文章用到了一些好的句型I'm writing to tell you that I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in October;.I miss you so much that I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。