Question

4．某英文報(bào)社正就"我和父母"這一話題展開討論．假如你是李華，請你用英語寫一篇短文給報(bào)社投稿，簡單介紹一下你的父母，談?wù)勀愫透改钢�間發(fā)生的最難忘的一件事，以及你對這件事的感受．
提示詞語：nice，responsible，kind，prepare for，encourage，confident，proud，love
提示問題：●What are your parents like？
●What was the most unforgettable thing between you and your parents？
●How did you feel？
At my school，we are also talking about the relationship between parents and me．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They①encouraged me to be confident and②told me not to③care much about the result．
①encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
②tell sb not to do sth 讓某人不要做某事
③care about在乎
【高分句型二】
And I've learned①that ②confidence is the mother of success．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為learn的賓語．
②confidence is the mother of success．信心是成功之母．

解答 At my school，we are also talking about the relationship between parents and me．I have a happy family．My parents，in my heart，are the most responsible and kindest persons in the world．（我的父母是最負(fù)責(zé)善良的）
Last year，I was chosen to take part in a speech competition．I felt very nervous．My parents tried hard to help me prepare for it．They encouraged me to be confident and told me not to care much about the result．【高分句型二】They said the process of learning was more meaningful．（一件難忘的事情）
With their help，I did very well that time．And I've learned that confidence is the mother of success．【高分句型二】I love my parents!（我的感受）

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