Question

【題目】假如你是王偉，你將代表學(xué)校參加全市中學(xué)生英語演講比賽。演講比賽的題目是“We should help do housework”。請你用英語寫一篇演講稿。

現(xiàn)象	你常做的家務(wù)	你的體會和看法
許多學(xué)生懶惰， 不愿做家務(wù)	整理床鋪；澆花； 打掃房間；倒垃圾	至少兩點

要求:1. 短文需包含要點提示中的所有信息，并可適當發(fā)揮；

2. 80 詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞；

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名和地名。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning!I’m Wang Wei.It’s my honor to give you a speech.My topic is “We should help parents do housework”.

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Thanks for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning!I’m Wang Wei.It’s my honor to give you a speech.My topic is “We should help parents do housework”.

Now many students are too lazy to do housework at home.But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy and tired after work.I often help my parents with much housework such as making the bed,watering flowers,cleaning the rooms, taking out the rubbish and doing the dishes.When I see the tidy room,I feel proud of myself.I also think doing housework is relaxing.

I think it’s our duty to share housework to keep the house clean and tidy.Let’s enjoy doing housework now.

Thanks for listening.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，根據(jù)“我們應(yīng)該幫忙做家務(wù)”寫一篇演講稿。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如too adj to, help sb do, help sb with, such as, make the bed, feel proud of以及doing housework is relaxing中動名詞作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。