Question

母愛情深，母愛無價(jià)；學(xué)會感恩，學(xué)會回報(bào)。某英語網(wǎng)站舉辦以“My Mother”為題的英語征文活動。請你根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹自己的母親和你們的真情故事。
提示：
1．短文應(yīng)包括導(dǎo)圖中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；
2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名。
3．詞數(shù)不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My Mother
We need love . We also need to love others . The person I love most is my mother.
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Answer 1

My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.
When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。
寫出順序的詞來表達(dá)文意更清楚。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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