Question

【題目】假設(shè)你將代表你校2013屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言, 請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿, 發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)要點(diǎn)如下表所示。

回顧	在美麗的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)了三年; 將會永遠(yuǎn)記住它 老師們總是盡力把課上得生動有趣 課余生活豐富多彩; 參加這些活動很有樂趣 學(xué)到了很多知識; 也取得了很大的進(jìn)步
感謝	老師和父母的支持和幫助
祝愿	……

注意:
發(fā)言稿須包括所有的要點(diǎn), 要求語句通順、意思連貫；
表格中"祝愿"一欄, 請用自己的2至3句話展開合理想象, 作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右, 發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates.
It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of (代表) the graduating class of 2013. ……
Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】We have studied in this beautiful school for three years. We will remember it for ever. Our teachers always try their best to make their lessons lively and interesting. After-school activities are rich and colourful. We have fun taking part in them. We have learned a lot. We have also made great progress. We want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. / We are grateful to our teachers and parents for their support and help. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future.
【解析】本書面表達(dá)是一篇發(fā)言稿,分三部分來寫。首先是回顧過去, 所以本部分應(yīng)該用過去時(shí)；然后是感謝應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí), 最后是祝愿, 可以用將來時(shí)。由于本發(fā)言稿是代表同學(xué)們做的, 故人稱應(yīng)該用we, 不要用I。應(yīng)注意連詞和固定短語的用法, 注意書寫時(shí)應(yīng)該包括所以內(nèi)容。文中可以用到短語有：盡力把課上得生動有趣 try their best to make their lessons lively and interesting；豐富多彩 rich and colourful；參加這些活動很有樂趣 have fun taking part in them；取得很大進(jìn)步make great progress；謝謝老師和父母的支持和幫助 thank our teachers and parents for their support and help，連詞成句，注意句與句之間的連貫性。