Question

【題目】俗話說“遠親不如近鄰”。近日某英文報正在舉行題為”My Neighbourhood”的征文活動。假如你是李雷，住在花園社區(qū)，根據(jù)以下流程圖提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。

Conditions

Neighbourhood What is your neighbourhood like?

Neighbours What are your neighbours like?

How do they help others?(give two examples)

What did you do for your neighbours? (give one example)

Feelings How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood?

要求：

1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2）必須包括流程圖中所有要點內(nèi)容，并適當發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。

My neighbourhood

My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. ________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My neighbourhood

My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is very beautiful and clean. There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it. And big green trees are around it. You can see a lot of people talking and playing there. Near my neighbourhood, there is a supermarket, a bank a hospital and many shops. So it is convenient for our life. My neighbours are very friendly. When someone has problems, they must help him. Once Aunt Li’s daughter was ill, and her husband was not at home. So her neighbours helped her send her daughter to hospital. Grandma Liu is old and her children are not around. She lives alone. So our neighbours often helps her wash dishes and clean up her house. I think I should do something for my neighbourhood. So every week I help the kids in our neighbourhood learn English and play games with them.

This is my neibourhood. Though it is not big, I feel lucky and happy to live here.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以My neighbourhood為題，寫一篇文章，介紹自己居住的社區(qū)。題目中利用流程圖的形式列出了文章中應(yīng)包括的內(nèi)容，學生們應(yīng)以此為依據(jù)，組織語言，并用正確的英語表達出來。審題可知，這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個方面：首先介紹自己居住的社區(qū)環(huán)境；接下來介紹自己的鄰居是什么樣的，并舉例說明鄰居們之間是如何互相幫助的，以及你自己為社區(qū)所做的事情；最后表達自己對社區(qū)的感受。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時或一般過去時為主，根據(jù)表達需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先應(yīng)將題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容都包括在內(nèi)，不能遺漏要點。可以適當發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實，但注意要切合主題，不能寫不沾邊的話。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，選擇恰當?shù)木湫�、短語和詞匯。句子結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復合句以及其他高級句式，提升文章檔次。同時注意語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意銜接自然，表達流暢。