Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明，大約有30%的高中生養(yǎng)成不吃早餐的習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇題為“Top Meal of the Day”的短文刊登在英語學(xué)習(xí)輔導(dǎo)報(bào)上。

原因：

1．晚上學(xué)習(xí)太晚，不吃早餐可多睡一會(huì)兒；

2．家長太忙無暇顧及，給錢讓孩子自己解決；

3．一些女孩子為保持苗條身材而一些男生則為了減肥不吃早餐。

結(jié)果：

1．課上注意力不能集中；

2．考試成績不理想。

建議：

1．早餐不可少.它提供全天所需能量的30%，且有助于創(chuàng)造能力的培養(yǎng)；

2. 自己的建議(至少2點(diǎn))

注意：1．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯；可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫。

2．詞數(shù): 120 ～150 ；文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。

3．參考詞匯：創(chuàng)造能力 creative abilities

Top Meal of the Day

A recent study shows that nearly 30 percent of the high school students do not have breakfast.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Top Meal of the Day

A recent study shows that nearly 30 percent of the high school students do not have breakfast. As a result, it is impossible for them to concentrate on their studies and get high marks in all kinds of tests

Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them. To our surprise, in order to stay slim and lose weight, a few school girls and boys often go to school without breakfast.

In fact, the morning meal plays an important part. It can provide 30 percent of the whole day’s energy. For creative abilities and better judgment, school kids should start their days with a regular breakfast .

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文，要點(diǎn)和開頭已經(jīng)給出.我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多。需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭結(jié)尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。要看清題目要求，短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯；可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文屬于話題類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果.這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。