Question

8．根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文．要求完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容．

It was Monday afternoon．Xiao Ming and Xiao Fang went home together after school．On their way，they saw a wallet on the ground．They picked it up．They didn't know whose it was．So they waited for the owner there．They waited and waited，but no one came．It was getting dark．They had to give it to a policeman．The policeman praised them．Then they went home happily．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖畫說說兩個學(xué)生做的一件好事，時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
描述圖畫；放學(xué)途中撿到一個錢包，等待失主，天黑了，失主沒來，將錢包交給警察

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
on one's way 在路上
plck up 撿起
wait for sb 等待某人
give sth to sb 把某物給某人
【高分句型】
1．On their way，they saw a wallet on the ground．
on one's way 在路上
2．They didn't know whose it was．
whose作為引導(dǎo)詞的賓語從句，作為know的賓語．
3．They waited and waited，but no one came．
bu表示轉(zhuǎn)折，不能和although雖然連用．

解答 It was Monday afternoon．Xiao Ming and Xiao Fang went home together after school．（第一幅圖）On their way，they saw a wallet on the ground．【高分句型】They picked it up．（第二幅圖）They didn't know whose it was．【高分句型】So they waited for the owner there．They waited and waited，but no one came．【高分句型】It was getting dark．（第三幅圖）They had to give it  to a policeman．The policeman praised them．Then they went home happily．（第四幅圖）

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇看圖作文，有四幅圖畫，這篇短文寫作的關(guān)鍵是看清圖片里的內(nèi)容，在理解上不能有偏差．所以我們首先要弄清楚圖片里的內(nèi)容，它主要講了一個什么故事，然后才能開始寫作．我們需要用正確的英語把整個事情的過程敘述清楚、完整．通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)該主要使用一般過去時態(tài)，所以要注意每句話中的謂語動詞的形式．在發(fā)揮想象力的同時，還要注意忠于原文的意思．