Question

【題目】書面表達。

Mike是一位中學(xué)生，他沉迷于電腦游戲中，并因此影響了學(xué)習(xí)。你（Jim）作為Mike的好朋友，你打算怎么幫助他呢？請用下面所給的提示寫一篇短文。

提示：give up; waste time; be interested in; have a great time

要求：1. 短文中必須包含所給提示詞，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等；3. 詞數(shù)80左右。短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mike,

Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now.______________

Yours,

Jim

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. I want to help you.

I know you are interested in playing computer games, but if you spend too much time on it, you can’t concentrate your attention on your studies. It will affect our studies badly. And we can’t make good grades. So I think you must give it up. It is a waste of time. You must put your put your heart into your studies. Only if we study well, can we have a bright future. Also，you can develop other good habits ,such as reading and doing sports and so on.

I hope my advice is good for you and you can feel good soon.

【解析】

試題這篇短文是一篇話題作文，你的好朋友Mike沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，影響了學(xué)習(xí)，你以Mike好朋友的身份，給他寫信，幫助他解決這個問題。這篇作文的開放性的，如何幫助Mike，該怎么解決這個問題，這些內(nèi)容都需要我們自己補充完整，并且用正確的英語表達出來。通過分析可知，這篇短文我們需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱來書寫。短文的主體應(yīng)放在給Mike的建議上。關(guān)于如何改變這種情形，我們可以從我們的真實生活出發(fā)，結(jié)合我們的生活實際。我們的生活中也許就有這樣的同學(xué)，如果是這樣的話，你該如何勸解他，改掉這個壞習(xí)慣，把心思重新都放在學(xué)習(xí)上來。寫作時還需要注意表達的連貫和流暢，多使用平時積累的好的短語和句型。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求，以Mike好朋友的身份，給他分析了沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的壞的影響，并且給他提出了好的建議。首先作者先點明了Mike目前的情況，I know you are interested in playing computer games, but if you spend too much time on it, you can’t concentrate your attention on your studies. It will affect our studies badly. And we can’t make good grades.接下來作者給出了自己的觀點，So I think you must give it up. It is a waste of time. You must put your put your heart into your studies.還提出了自己的建議，you can develop other good habits ,such as reading and doing sports and so on。短文中作者使用了條件狀語從句、倒裝、賓語從句、固定短語搭配等，這些句式使短文的意思連貫流暢，增強了文章的表現(xiàn)力。