Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是Tina，你的筆友Tom給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，信中他訴說了他的煩惱：他最好的朋友要過生日，他的朋友們準(zhǔn)備的禮物都很貴，可是他卻沒有足夠的錢給最好的朋友買很昂貴的禮物。請根據(jù)提示給他寫一封回信，給他一些合理的建議。
提示：1)買禮物并不一定必須買貴的。
2) 沒有必要因?yàn)椴毁I貴的就感到難過。
3)同學(xué)應(yīng)該會(huì)理解。
4)花錢太多還得向父母要。
5)可以買花或者自制賀卡等。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,
Glad to hear from you, but I'm sorry to know that you're so worried. In my opinion, gifts are just something to show our love. They can't be measured by money.
I don't think you need to buy an expensive gift, although your classmates will buy expensive gifts for him. If you buy one expensive gift, you will need too much money. And if you don't have enough money, you have to ask your parents for money. And I don't think it is a good idea. Why don't you buy some flowers and make a beautiful birthday card for your best friend? That'll be enough to make him happy.
Yours,
Tina
【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，根據(jù)情景設(shè)置，針對電子郵件中Tom所訴說的煩惱，提出自己合理化的建議。要點(diǎn)提示中共列舉了5點(diǎn)，這也是寫作的基本框架，要求考生認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)漢語提示，去理清自己的寫作思路，準(zhǔn)確把握句子的時(shí)態(tài)，想著如選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)挠⒄Z句式去表達(dá)。文章中出現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句：If you buy one expensive gift, you will need too much money. And if you don't have enough money, you have to ask your parents for money.復(fù)合句的使用，豐富了語言表達(dá)效果。同時(shí)，對于最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn)的處理采用了提建議的一種表達(dá)方式：Why don't you buy some flowers and make a beautiful birthday card for your best friend? ，也是作者消除好友煩惱的同時(shí)提出的合理化建議，成為文章的寫作亮點(diǎn)。