Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

David 最近特別苦惱。他的學(xué)習(xí)成績退步很多，因?yàn)樗麧u漸迷戀上電腦游戲，經(jīng)常背著父母消耗時(shí)間到深夜，白天有空就上網(wǎng)，父母知道了很生氣，而他還與父母發(fā)生爭吵。David寫信給朋友Lily，讓Lily幫他解決這個(gè)問題。請你以Lily的名義給他提供一些建議，要點(diǎn)如下：

1、 不要玩游戲，游戲?qū)ρ劬Σ缓�，對學(xué)習(xí)有壞處。（play, bad）

2、 多參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng), 周末多和同學(xué)一起活動(dòng)。（play sports, play with）

3、 學(xué)會(huì)和朋友父母溝通，和父母親多交流，向父母道歉。（talk with, say sorry）

4、 努力學(xué)習(xí)，爭取取得好的成績。(work hard, grades)

要求：1、可以對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。2、100詞左右，開頭已寫出，但不記入總詞數(shù)。

Dear David,

I know you are not happy these days, you did badly in your study.

Best wishes!

Yours

Lily

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I know you are not happy these days, you did badly in your study. You loved playing computer games so much that

you couldn’t stop playing them until very late at night. It’s very normal for your parents to angry with you. You shouldn’t argue with them about it. So I will give you some suggestions. First, don't computer games, because it is bad for your eyes, it’s also bad for study. Second, play sports often, you can play with your classmates on the weekend. Third, learn to communicate with your parents and friends. You should often talk with your parents, tell them you are wrong and say sorry to them. Fourth, work hard, forget past, you will get good grades.

Best wishes!

Yours

Lily

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第二人稱，以祈使句式為主。注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文能夠充分運(yùn)用提示詞進(jìn)行，詳細(xì)說明了朋友的煩惱所在，并且對此事發(fā)表了自己的看法與見解。見解可行，符合事實(shí)，多數(shù)學(xué)生存在的問題，倡議大家不要玩電腦游戲，正確分析原因。提出合理化的建議。是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。