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4．根據(jù)所給提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，短文已給出的部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名．

Twenty years ago Sandy and Kitty were in the same class．They studied together，sat on the same bench and became good friends．They had the same hobbies．Of course，they have some trouble．Sandy was very quiet，but Kitty was outgoing，so when Kitty told some stories，Sandy always didn't listen carefully．
Later they went to different colleges．They had not seen each other then．Last week they met on the treet!Sandy is a doctor now．She works in a famous hospital．Her husband is a doctor，too．They have a lovely daughter．She is so thin that Kitty can hardly get to know her．Kitty is a clerk in a company．She becomes thin，too．Her husband is a driver．Their son studies hard and often get good grades．They are very happy．They want to Ren Min Zoo next week．The two families will go together．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖畫(huà)說(shuō)說(shuō)Sandy和Kitty兩個(gè)人的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
描述圖畫(huà)；二十年前：好朋友，同桌，愛(ài)好相間，經(jīng)常一起，煩惱…
現(xiàn)在：職業(yè)，家庭，變化，愿望

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
become good friends成為好朋友
so…that 如此…以至于
study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)
get good grades 取得好成績(jī)
【高分句型】
1．They studied together，sat on the same bench and became good friends．
and連接的三個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)．
2．Sandy was very quiet，①but Kitty was outgoing，so ②when Kitty told some stories，Sandy always didn't listen carefully．
①but表示轉(zhuǎn)折，不能與although連用．
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

3．She is so thin that Kitty can hardly get to know her．
so…that如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Twenty years ago Sandy and Kitty were in the same class．They studied together，sat on the same bench and became good friends．【高分句型】They had the same hobbies．Of course，they have some differences．Sandy was very quiet，but Kitty was outgoing，so when Kitty told some stories，Sandy always didn't listen carefully．【高分句型】（二十年前）
Later they went to different colleges．They had not seen each other then．Last week they met on the street!Sandy is a doctor now．She works in a famous hospital．Her husband is a doctor，too．They have a lovely daughter．She is so thin that Kitty can hardly get to know her．【高分句型】Kitty is a clerk in a company．She becomes thin，too．Her husband is a driver．Their son studies hard and often get good grades．They are very happy．They want to Ren Min Zoo next week．The two families will go together．（現(xiàn)在）

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