Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Linda，今年13歲，是某校八年級的學(xué)生。你想?yún)⒓訉W(xué)校組織的“走進(jìn)敬老院，關(guān)愛老年人”志愿者活動(dòng)。你的性格外向，細(xì)心，擅長唱歌，跳舞，下棋，彈吉他等。你認(rèn)為自己很合適這份志愿者工作。請根據(jù)下面的提示給活動(dòng)組織者（organizer）寫一封申請書。

要求：1. 條理清晰，意思連貫 2．80詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)

提示詞： Volunteer jobs/the old people’s home/outgoing/careful/ be good at /Sing,/dance ,/play chess/ play the guitar /be good with/ cheer sb. up/......

提示詞： Volunteer jobs/the old people’s home/outgoing/careful/ be good at /Sing,/dance ,/play chess/ play the guitar /be good with/ cheer sb. up/......

Dear organizer,

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I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Linda

Answer 1

【答案】Dear organizer,

I’m Linda. I’m thirteen years old and I’m a student in Grade Eight. I’d like to join the volunteer group to work in the old people’s home.

I can sing and dance well. I’m good at playing the guitar and I can also play chess. I can give them a nice guitar show and play chess with them. I’m an outgoing and careful girl. I’m good at looking after others and I’m good with old people . So I think I’ll be good at this job.

I really want to bring joy to the elders and cheer them up . Please let me join you! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Linda

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文，也是書信作文。仔細(xì)閱讀提示，理清本文的寫作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要再次認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：

親愛的組織者，

我是琳達(dá)。我十三歲，是八年級的學(xué)生。我想加入志愿者小組在老人之家工作。

我會(huì)唱歌和跳舞。我擅長彈吉他，也會(huì)下棋。我可以給他們一個(gè)很好的吉他表演，和他們下棋。我是一個(gè)性格外向、細(xì)心的女孩。我善于照顧別人，也善于照顧老人。所以我認(rèn)為我會(huì)勝任這份工作的。

我真的想給長輩們帶來歡樂，讓他們高興。請讓我加入你們吧！我期待你的答復(fù)。

你的，

琳達(dá)