Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

濰坊正在創(chuàng)建文明城市，假設(shè)你所在的學(xué)校要開展以“做文明市民，從不闖紅燈做起”為主題的交通安全宣傳月活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勅绾巫袷亟煌ǚㄒ?guī)。以下內(nèi)容供參考：

walkers	cross, look, left and right, carefully
drivers/riders	drink, slow down, wear a seat belt(系安全帶)，traffic lights, a helmet(頭盔)
passengers	get on /off, push, wait in line

寫作要求：1.條理清楚，行文連貫，邏輯性強(qiáng)，書寫規(guī)范；

2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名；

3. 80詞左右。

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe,

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Answer 1

【答案】

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe, everyone should follow traffic rules. When you walk, you should walk at the right side of the road. Always be careful and look left and right before you cross the road. If you like riding, don’t run through the red traffic lights. Don’t ride too fast. If you ride a motorbike, remember to wear your helmet. If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights. You must always wear a seat belt. You must never drink wine. When passengers are waiting for the bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn. Don’t push others. Don’t get off the bus until it has stopped.

Remember: it is better to be on the safe side.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以寫一篇作文談?wù)勱P(guān)于如何遵守交通法規(guī)。根據(jù)表格提示可知我們這篇短文主要包括三部分的內(nèi)容。一是行人在路上走應(yīng)該注意的問(wèn)題；二是司機(jī)開車的注意事項(xiàng)，比如不許酒駕，開車要慢，要注意及安全帶。摩托車駕駛者要注意戴頭盔等。三是坐公交車要注意排隊(duì)，車停好再下車。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者從三個(gè)方面講述了我們應(yīng)該如何遵守交通法規(guī)，層次非常的清晰。而且句子組織的也不錯(cuò)，并且用到了一些常見(jiàn)的復(fù)合句When you walk, you should walk at the right side of the road.和If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights.和這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如When passengers are waiting for the bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn. Don’t get off the bus until it has stopped等。