Question

【題目】書面表達 (計15分)

以My good friend為題寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80 左右,條理清晰，語意連貫，字跡工整。

必須包括以下要點：

1、名叫Tom，三年前我就認識了。

2、圓臉、戴著眼鏡，個子比我高得多.

3、喜歡說笑,很誠實，能保守秘密，是我的忠實朋友。

4、所有科目中最喜歡法語，覺得學(xué)外語其樂無窮，

5、癡迷于DIY。曾經(jīng)，和我一起裝飾我的臥室，把墻涂成藍色，張貼一些美麗的圖畫，安裝明亮的燈。我們合作得很愉快。

6、長大后想成為一名優(yōu)秀的設(shè)計師（designer）。

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a good friend named Tom. I began to know him three years ago.He has a round face,and always wears glasses.He is much taller than me.He loves to smile.And he is very honest.He can keep secrets for me.He, is my true friend.Of all the subjects ,He likes French best because he thinks it is interesting to learn a foreign language.

He is crazy about DIY. Once, we decorated my bedroom.We painted the wall blue and put up some beautiful pictures.We installed bright lights. We worked very well.He wants to become a good designer when he grows up.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如Of all the subjects ,He likes French best because he thinks it is interesting to learn a foreign language.

He is crazy about DIY.等等。