Question

9．根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫出一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所要完成的回信內(nèi)．所給英文提示詞語供選用．請(qǐng)不要寫出你的真實(shí)姓名和校名．
假如你叫李平，最近和英國朋友John通過郵件談?wù)撊松鷫粝氲脑掝}，他想了解你的夢想是什么，你為什么會(huì)有這樣的夢想，你準(zhǔn)備怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢想．請(qǐng)根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件．
提示詞語：visit，know，understand，different，free，culture
What's your dream in your life？
Why do you have such a dream？
What are you going to do to realize your dream？

My dream is to travel all over the world because I love travelling．
I think travelling is really a good way to know about different people and different cultures from different countries．It can not only help me get more information and widen my eyes，but also let me feel relaxed．
To realize my dream，I think it's important to work hard with all my subjects，such as history，English and geography．Thus，when I visit other countries，I can understand their cultures better，and talk with the local people more freely．What about your dream？．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容給你的英國朋友John寫一封郵件談?wù)勅松鷫粝�，注意郵件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1人生夢想是什么？
2為什么有如此夢想？
3怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想？
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
all over the world全世界
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
help sb do sth幫助某人做某事
such as 例如
【高分句型】
1．I think ①②travelling is really a good way ③to know about different people and different cultures from different countries．
①think后接上省略了that的賓語從句．
②travelling 動(dòng)名詞做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)is．
③動(dòng)詞不定式作為后置定語，修飾way．
2．It can①not only ②help me get more information and widen my eyes，but also ③let me feel relaxed．
①not only…but also…不僅…而且…，連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分．
②help sb do sth幫助某人做某事
③let sb do sth讓某人做某事

解答 My dream is to travel all over the world because I love travelling．（人生夢想是什么）
I think travelling is really a good way to know about different people and different cultures from different countries【高分句型】．It can not only help me get more information and widen my eyes，but also let me feel relaxed．【高分句型】（為什么有如此夢想）
To realize my dream，I think it's important to work hard with all my subjects，such as history，English and geography．Thus，when I visit other countries，I can understand their cultures better，and talk with the local people more freely．What about your dream？（怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．