Question

【題目】假如你是勞拉(Laura)，你的好朋友蒂娜(Tina)對(duì)于將要到來(lái)的考試感到很擔(dān)憂，擔(dān)心不能取得好成績(jī)。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封信，針對(duì)她的問(wèn)題，提出你的建議，并給她一些安慰和鼓勵(lì)。

提示詞：worried about，normal，helpful (有幫助的)，first of all，next，if，will，nervous (緊張的)，believe in oneself，best

要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.70詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tina，

I'm sorry to hear that _________________________________________________________

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Yours，

Laura

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tina，

I'm sorry to hear that you are worried about the coming exam.It's normal to feel nervous when there is an exam.I have the same feeling as you.Here is my advice.I hope they are helpful to you.

First of all，the exam results don't mean everything.It's good to care about the result，but if you care too much about it，you will not be able to enjoy your study.Next，if you care too nervous，you'd better do something to relax.Don't spend your time worrying about the exams all the time.

Just believe in yourself and try your best.I always believe you're the best!

Yours，

Laura

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是一封書信，結(jié)合所給的寫作要求，闡明問(wèn)題、給出建議。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中了he same feeling as ，F(xiàn)irst of all，be helpful to , care about， spend ...doing..., all the time, believe in等詞組的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、條件狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。