Question

17．回顧初中三年成長過程，你一定有很多感受．假設你將代表你校2011年畢業(yè)生在學校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，發(fā)言稿的內容如下：

回 顧	美麗的校園、生動有趣的課堂、三年來在學習、生活方面的收獲
感謝	老師的教育、父母的支持、同學的幫助
祝愿	考生自擬，至少兩點

注意：1．詞數80左右．發(fā)言稿的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
2．發(fā)言稿須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順．不能照抄A部分原文；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名．
Good afternoon，ladies and gentlemen，my dear teachers and fellow graduates，
It is a great honor（榮譽）for me to make a speech on behalf（代表）of the graduating class of 2011．
                  ．
Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It's lucky for us to study at such a beautiful school．
句中使用句式為"it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth"，其中"it"為形式主語，代指不定式短語"to study at such a beautiful school"．這句話意為：對我們來說，在這樣一個美麗的學校學習很幸運．
高分句型二：
They often give us a hand when we have difficulties．
句中"when we have difficulties"為時間狀語從句，句中短語有"give sb a hand 幫助某人"．這句話意為：當我們有困難的時候，他們經常幫助我們．

解答 Good afternoon，ladies and gentlemen，my dear teachers and fellow graduates，
     It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2011．（開篇點題）
     It's lucky for us to study at such a beautiful school．【高分句型一】All our teachers always do their best to make lessons lively and interesting．They often give us a hand when we have difficulties．【高分句型二】Classmates are getting on well with each other．In the past three years，we have taken part in many activities and learned a lot．We could hardly succeed without our teachers'efforts，our parents'support and our classmates'help．At this moment，I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us．（表達感謝）
    Finally，I hope our school can be more beautiful and our friendship can last forever．（表達祝福）
    Thank you for listening．

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．