Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)
危險無處不在，我們學(xué)生應(yīng)該處處注意安全，遠(yuǎn)離危險。請你根據(jù)下面表格所提供的信息，寫一篇題為“Always Be Careful”的英語短文。要求90詞左右。

在 家	看完電視后，及時關(guān)機(jī)。 獨(dú)自在家時，不要讓陌生人進(jìn)屋。 不邀請網(wǎng)友來家。
在學(xué)校	不要在教室里互相追逐。 做體育運(yùn)動時，注意保護(hù)自己。
在路上	遵守交通規(guī)則，過馬路時，注意交通指示燈。 ……（請自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）

Always Be Careful
As a middle school student, we should try to stay away from danger as the problem of safety is becoming more and more serious
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If all these are kept in mind, you are sure to enjoy a much safer life.

Answer 1

【答案】參考例文
Always Be Careful
As a middle school student, we should try to stay away from danger as the problem of safety is becoming more and more serious.
After watching TV, you should turn it off in time. If you're at home alone, don't open the door for strangers or invite friends online to your home. While you are at school, running after each other in the classroom can be dangerous. At the same time, you should remember to protect yourself while doing sports. When you are in the street, traffic rules should be obeyed all the time. For example, never listen to music while you are riding a bike. Besides, always follow the traffic lights when you cross the street.
If all these are kept in mind, you are sure to enjoy a much safer life.
【解析】這篇作文要求我們以Always Be careful為題，介紹在我們生活中應(yīng)如何注意安全，避免危險。題目中給我們列出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，主要分成三個方面，在家、在學(xué)校和在路上，從這三個方面分別來介紹如何小心仔細(xì)，避免危險。其中在路上這一部分，需要學(xué)生們自己再擬一條內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充，這就需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮想象力，聯(lián)系生活實(shí)際，補(bǔ)充完整。通過分析可知，這篇作文我們應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第二人稱you來敘述，要注意句中謂語動詞形式的變化，使用平時積累的詞匯和短語，多使用簡單句，要符合英語的表達(dá)規(guī)范，不要寫漢語式的英語。注意上下文的連貫，使用一些簡單的連詞或副詞，使文章的表達(dá)連貫、流暢。