Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)中文提示寫一篇作文，要求語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，80詞左右。

1.Amy是我最好的朋友。我認(rèn)識(shí)她已經(jīng)十年了。

2.她方臉，長(zhǎng)鼻，明亮而微笑的眼睛，齊肩發(fā)。

3.她在任何時(shí)候樂意助人。常常幫我輔導(dǎo)作業(yè)。

4.長(zhǎng)大后她想當(dāng)社會(huì)工作者。

5.她可以聽取人們的問題，并幫他們解決問題。

6.我們總是愿意分享彼此的歡樂和悲傷(sadness)，我們將永遠(yuǎn)是好朋友。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend

Amy is my best friend. I've known her for ten years.She has a square face, a long nose, bright and smiling eyes,And she has.shoulder length hair.She is always willing to help others at any time. She often helps me with my homework.When she grows up, she wants to be a social worker.She can listen to people's problems and help them solve the problem.We are always willing to share our happiness and sadness, we will be good friends forever.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達(dá)，寫作的話題為我最好的朋友，寫作的內(nèi)容包括我朋友的長(zhǎng)相，性格特征，個(gè)人的理想工作，以及我們之間的感情，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)主要使用單數(shù)第三人稱，同時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合題意和語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如She is always willing to help others at any time. She often helps me with my homework.When she grows up, she wants to be a social worker.She can listen to people's problems and help them solve the problem.等等。