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4．英文有句諺語"East，wast，home's best．"某英文報以此為標(biāo)題，向廣大中學(xué)生征文．請根據(jù)下面圖表信息寫一篇短文，介紹你家的情況．內(nèi)容包括：你家的居室及居住環(huán)境、家庭成員及家庭成員之間的關(guān)系，并談?wù)勅绾巫屇愕募腋�美好�?br />提示：
（1）短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；
（2）短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
（3）詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

                      East，wast，home's best
There is an old saying，"East，west，home's best．"I live in a house in the countryside．There's a big living room，three bedrooms，a kitchen and a washroom in it．There're some trees and flowers around my house．The air is really clean．And I often hear birds singing．There're four people in my family．They're my parents，my sister and I．We're helpful and friendly．And we always get on well with each other．I'm happy I have a good family．I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work．I'll study harder so that I can make more money in the future．With our effort．I'm sure my home will be better and better．．

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分析 根據(jù)題目要求，本篇作文應(yīng)該從以下幾個方面入手：1．你家的居室及居住環(huán)境、家庭成員．2．家庭成員之間的關(guān)系．3．如何讓你的家更美好．建議用兩個段落進(jìn)行敘述，注意條理清晰，語言準(zhǔn)確，談?wù)摰谝缓偷诙�點(diǎn)，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三點(diǎn)用一般將來時．

解答 There is an old saying，"East，west，home's best．"I live in a house in the countryside．There's a big living room，three bedrooms，a kitchen and a washroom in it．There're some trees and flowers around my house．The air is really clean．And I often hear birds singing．There're four people in my family．They're my parents，my sister and I．We're helpful and friendly．And we always get on well with each other．I'm happy I have a good family．I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work．I'll study harder so that I can make more money in the future．With our effort．I'm sure my home will be better and better．

點(diǎn)評 本題要求寫一篇關(guān)于家庭短文．要求中已經(jīng)給出一些線索．動筆前先要注意認(rèn)真寫作要求，確定寫作內(nèi)容；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改．