Question

19．根據(jù)中文提示，寫(xiě)一篇介紹Mary的短文．
要求：1、語(yǔ)言通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確
2、80左右單詞
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．May是你最好的朋友，你倆從7歲時(shí)就認(rèn)識(shí)了．她住的離你家很近．
2．她個(gè)子，圓臉，小鼻子，長(zhǎng)發(fā)，很友好．
3．她很聰明，樂(lè)于助人，經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)做作業(yè)，幫老師收發(fā)（hand in/out）作業(yè)本．大家都喜歡她．
4．她長(zhǎng)大后想成為一名醫(yī)生，幫助那些病人．
My Best Friend
May is my best friend．We began to know each other at7．       ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
 She often help her classmates to finish their homework．她經(jīng)常幫助她的同學(xué)完成家庭作業(yè)．這個(gè)句子中含有一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)"help sb．to do sth．"意思是"幫助某人做某事"
高分句型二：
She is going to be a doctor when she grows up．She wants to help the sick people．長(zhǎng)大的時(shí)候，她想當(dāng)醫(yī)生，她想幫助病人．這個(gè)句子含有一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)"be going to do sth．"意思是"將要做某事"，grow up意思是"長(zhǎng)大"是固定短語(yǔ)．

解答 May is my best friend．We began to know each other at7．She lives near me．/Her house is close to mine．
（介紹長(zhǎng)相）She is a tall girl．She has a round face with a small nose．She has long hair．She always smiles to people．She is always friendly to us．
She is clever and helpful．【高分句型一】She often help her classmates to finish their homework．She helps her teachers to hand in and out the exercise books．Everyone likes her very much．
【高分句型二】She is going to be a doctor when she grows up．She wants to help the sick people．（當(dāng)醫(yī)生的原因）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 首先要仔細(xì)審題，確定要使用的時(shí)態(tài)，以及人稱(chēng)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，用地道的語(yǔ)言表述出來(lái)，注意要點(diǎn)不能有漏落，這篇文章比較簡(jiǎn)單，可以采用簡(jiǎn)單句來(lái)寫(xiě)，還要盡量使用一些高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)，比如時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，不定式，"help sb．to do sth．"，"be going to do sth．"等等，這樣可以提高得分的檔次．