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19．假定英語課上老師要求間桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤．每句中最多有兩處．錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號^，并在其下面寫出該增加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用（/）劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞，
2．在答題卡的第六節(jié)的題上答題．
3．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
There lived a unhappy king a long time ago．He slept badly．His face was always pale．He often  cries for no reason．This made the queen worrying．One day，a doctor was called^to examine the king．He said to the queen．"Something is wrong in your mind．He needs to wear the shirt of a  happy person to make himself happy．"Then，the palace singers came to the palace and said．"It's true that I'm famous．And I'm not happy because I'm always worried about being followed by the  others．"Finally，a poor man came to the king room．This was what he said"Even^I am neither an  officer nor a famous person，I'm happy，because I have everything I want，I don't want what I can't have．"

Answer 1

分析 全文大意：
很久以前有一位不開心的國王．他睡眠很差．他的臉總是很蒼白．他經(jīng)常無理由地哭泣．這使王后很擔心．一天，找來一位醫(yī)生給國王做檢查．他對王后說"他的大腦有問題．"他需要穿一位快樂的人的襯衫讓他快樂起來．"后來，宮廷的歌手來到宮殿說"我真的很有名．但是我不開心是因為我總擔心被別人跟著．"最后一個窮人來到國王的房間．他說："盡管我既不是一個官員也不是名人，我很高興，因為我擁有我想要的一切，我不想要我所不能擁有的．"

解答 答案：
There lived a unhappy king a long time ago．He slept badly．
                an   
His face was always pale．He often cries for no reason．This made
                                                     cried
the queen worrying．One day，a doctor was called^to examine the king．
               worried                                                in
He said to the queen．"Something is wrong in your mind．He needs to
                                                                    his
wear the shirt of a happy person to make himself happy．"Then，the
palace singers came to the palace and said．"It's true that I'm famous
           singer
And I'm not happy because I'm always worried about being followed by the others．
But                                                                                                     others
"Finally，a poor man came to the king room．This was what he said"Even^I am 
                                                  king's                                              though
neither an officer nor a famous person，I'm happy，because I have everything
I want，I don't want what I can't have．"
1、a→an              考查不定冠詞      根據(jù)unhappy是一個以元音音素/?/開頭的單詞，所以在它前面的不定冠詞要用an，故答案為an
2、cries→cried     考查時態(tài)      結合上文There lived a unhappy king a long time ago．He slept badly．His face was always pale 可知本篇短文講述的過去發(fā)生的事情故時態(tài)為一般過去時，所以應將cries 改為動詞過去式 cried．故答案為cried
3、worrying→worried        考查ed形容詞和ing形容詞         根據(jù)make sb+形容詞作賓語補足語，根據(jù)ing形容詞一般修飾物描述客觀事物的屬性；而ed形容詞一般修飾人，形容人的主觀感受，在本句中描述的王后的感受，故用ed形容詞，故答案為worried．
4、called→called in    考查動詞短語        結合上文意思可知是召來一位醫(yī)生給國王檢查，call意為"稱呼"，不存在call sb to do sth，call in意為"邀請；召來"即call in sb to do sth"召集某人做某事"故答案為called in
5、your→his              考查物主代詞       結合上文的意思可知醫(yī)生告訴王后國王的大腦有問題，故用形容詞性的物主代詞his來代指，故答案為his
6、singers→singer        考查名詞單復數(shù)   結合下文歌手說的話"It's true that I'm famous"的意思"是真的我很有名"可知上文的歌手是一個人故用名詞的單數(shù)，故答案為singer
7、And→But                考查連詞     根據(jù)上文表達的意思為"It's true that I'm famous"的意思"是真的，我很有名"以及下文的意思 I'm not happy because I'm always worried about being followed by the others"我不開心是因為我總擔心被別人跟著"可推知上下文表達一種轉折關系，故用轉折連詞but，故答案為but
8、the others→others      考查不定代詞       根據(jù)the others 表示某一范圍內除去一部分以后其余的全體；結合句意．"但是我不開心是因為我總擔心被別人跟著"是泛指別人，故用others表示除去一部分以后的另一些，但不是剩余的全體．故答案為others
9、king→king's               考查名詞所有格        根據(jù)Finally，a poor man came to the king room，句中king和room表達一種所有關系，即一個窮人來的國王的房間．故用king的名詞所有格形式，故答案為king's
10、Even→Even though    考查連詞         根據(jù)even意為"甚至、即使"結合I am neither an officer nor a famous person，I'm happy表達的一種轉折意思故用even though來引導讓步狀語從句，意為"盡管，即使"．故答案為Even though

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