Question

【題目】假如你最好的朋友叫凱特，請從以下幾個方面向大家介紹一下她的生活習(xí)慣，80詞左右。

提示:

1.在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)很努力，經(jīng)常在家看書，有時上網(wǎng)。

2.身體很健康，每周鍛煉三四次，每天步行上學(xué)。

3.飲食習(xí)慣很好，每天吃很多蔬菜和水果。

Answer 1

【答案】Kate is my best friend. She studies hard at school and she likes reading very much. She often reads some books at home. Sometimes she goes online. She is very healthy. She exercises three or four times a week, likes playing basketball and running. She walks to school every day. She has good eating habits, too. She eats lots of fruit and vegetables every day.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，介紹了作者的好朋友Kate的生活習(xí)慣。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查學(xué)生運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來表達生活習(xí)慣的語言。注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：and連接的并列句She studies hard at school and she likes reading very much.；表示頻率句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用連詞，注意頻率副詞交替使用。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。頻率副詞及短語的使用，如：often，sometimes，three or four times a week，every day.等恰切地表達了Kate的生活習(xí)慣；文中還使用了like doing, walk to, lots of, eating habits 等，這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。