Question

12．中考結(jié)束，你將度過一個(gè)漫長(zhǎng)的假期．假設(shè)你是Li Ming，你的美國(guó)筆友Mike 來信想知道你的假期計(jì)劃，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示用英語寫一封回信，告訴他你的假期安排．
1．幫助父母做家務(wù)；
2．每天鍛煉身體；
3．大量閱讀；
4．旅游放松．
要求：
（ l ）詞數(shù)：70 個(gè)左右
（ 2 ）文章必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐詞翻譯可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
（ 3 ）文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名；
（ 4 ）信的開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mike，
I'm very glad to receive your letter．Now，I'll tell you my vacation plan．
At first，I am going to help my parents to do the housework，such as doing the dishes，cleaning the floor，making the bed and so on．Then，I'll exercise every day．I think it is good for our health to play sports．At the same time，I'll read some books to open my eyes．Finally，I'll travel to relax with my parents．Maybe we'll go to the beach in Hainan．What about your vacation plan？Welcome to China!                                                                                                 Yours

                                                                                                    Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫信給筆友告訴他你的假期計(jì)劃．注意信件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．幫助父母做家務(wù)；
2．每天鍛煉身體；
3．大量閱讀；
4．旅游放松．

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
be going to 打算…
help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事
such as 例如
be good for 對(duì)…有益
at the same time同時(shí)
【高分句型】
1．I think①it②is good for our health to play sports．
①think后接的是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．it是形式主語，后面的動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語．
②be good for 對(duì)…有益
2．①At the same time，I'll read some books②to open my eyes．
①at the same time同時(shí)
②動(dòng)詞不定式表目的，做目的狀語．

解答 Dear Mike，
 I'm very glad to receive your letter．Now，I'll tell you my vacation plan．At first，I am going to help my parents to do the housework，such as doing the dishes，cleaning the floor，making the bed and so on．（幫助父母做家務(wù)）Then，I'll exercise every day．I think it is good for our health to play sports．（每天鍛煉身體）【高分句型】At the same time，I'll read some books to open my eyes．（大量閱讀）【高分句型】Finally，I'll travel to relax with my parents．Maybe we'll go to the beach in Hainan．（旅游放松）What about your vacation plan？Welcome to China!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．