Question

假設母親節(jié)即將來臨，請你借此機會給你母親寫封信（ 不少于８０詞 ），和她談談心里話。

要點：

１、母親辛勤工作，目的是讓我過上更好的生活，受到更好的教育

2、平時，母親把家里打理得井井有條，節(jié)假日，帶我出去玩樂

3、母親經(jīng)常與我溝通交流，在學習上對我嚴格要求，成績不理想時，鼓勵我不放棄；在生活中，遇到困難時，叫我要笑對生活

表達對母親的感謝與祝福

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Mother’s Day is coming. I，d like to say something to you.

You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You often make our house clean and tidy. When we have holidays ,you often take time to go out with us .You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.

You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!

Happy Mothers Day!

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求在母親節(jié)來臨之時給母親寫一份信。信的內(nèi)容包含兩個主要方面的內(nèi)容，一是，母親為我所做的一切，二是表達對母親的感激和祝愿。具體的材料已經(jīng)給出，寫作時主要條理清晰，語句通順。

【亮點說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當。

考點：表格作文。