Question

15．初中的學(xué)習(xí)即將結(jié)束，新的高中生活將要到來(lái)．假如你是李明，請(qǐng)你用英文給你的班主任寫(xiě)一封信，講述你初中生涯中的一兩件讓你感動(dòng)的事情，同時(shí)告訴她對(duì)于即將到來(lái)的生活所做出的簡(jiǎn)單計(jì)劃．
注意：1．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)等信息；
2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)；
3．請(qǐng)將信的內(nèi)容和格式完整的呈現(xiàn)在答題卡上．
Dear Miss Zhang，
How time flies！My life in junior school will come to an end soon．Life was happy in the past three years but one bad thing in my mind is that I failed an important exam last year．I didn't prepare for the exam because I played computer games too much those days，which made my parents and you upset and worried．I will never forget that day when you talked with me face to face．It's a pity that I failed an exam but I am happy that I learned a lesson from this failure with your help．That is，no pains m no gains，Hard work leads to success and no one can have a harvest without any effort．Therefore，I will study harder than ever．I won't waste my valuable time any more．
Best wishes!

Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Life was happy in the past three years ①but one bad thing in my mind is ②that I failed an important exam last year．在過(guò)去的三年里，生活是快樂(lè)的，但在我的腦海里有一件糟糕的事情是，我去年一個(gè)重要的考試不及格．
①but為轉(zhuǎn)折連詞，前后分句構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系．
②that位于系動(dòng)詞is之后，引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句．
高分句型二：
I didn't prepare for the exam①because I played computer games too much those days，②which ③made my parents and you upset and worried．我沒(méi)有準(zhǔn)備考試，因?yàn)槟切┤兆游彝骐娔X游戲太多，這使我的父母和你感到煩惱和擔(dān)心．
①because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
②which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面的整個(gè)句子．
③make sb+adj使得某人怎樣，形容詞作賓補(bǔ)．

解答 Dear Miss Zhang，
How time flies!My life in junior school will come to an end soon．【點(diǎn)題，引出下文】Life was happy in the past three years but one bad thing in my mind is that I failed an important exam last year．【高分句型】I didn't prepare for the exam because I played computer games too much those days，which made my parents and you upset and worried．【高分句型】I will never forget that day when you talked with me face to face．It's a pity that I failed an exam but I am happy that I learned  a lesson from this failure with your help．That is，no pains m no gains，Hard work leads to success and no one can have a harvest without any effort．【講述初中生涯中的一件讓我感動(dòng)的事情】
  Therefore，I will study harder than ever．I won't waste my valuable time any more．【對(duì)于即將到來(lái)的生活所做出的簡(jiǎn)單計(jì)劃】
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Ming．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫(xiě)作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開(kāi)作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．