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17．隨著年齡的增長，不少青少年發(fā)現(xiàn)越來越難與父母溝通和交流，各方面的分歧使兩代人之間的關(guān)系日益緊張．請圍繞該話題用英語談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />要求：（1）內(nèi)容包括   ①分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的主要原因；
②提出解決該問題的具體建議．
（2）字?jǐn)?shù)：60-80字
（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學(xué)校名和地名．
I don't like my parents．（父母的表現(xiàn)）They always tell me I should do this，and should not do that．It sometimes makes me angry，“said Zhang Hua，a middle school student．Almost every teenager have the same question．Why？
（原因）One of the biggest things is when someone becomes a parent，he/she likes worrying things．They worry about everything about you，from the time you were born．All these things are part of your life．They want you to grow up healthily and happily．
So how can you make things easier on yourself？（建議）Just make sure your parents know what you're doing．Get them to know your friends．Phone if you stay somewhere else so that your parents don't call every hospital in the phone book looking for your body．Say sorry to them when you make mistakes．Take responsibility for what you have done．Talk about your ideas with them．
Most of all，try to think about why your parents do this or do that．Someday，when you become a parent，they may be able to help you how to get on with your children．（總結(jié)全文）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，1．分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的主要原因；2．提出解決該問題的具體建議．
動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．可用詞匯如：worry about擔(dān)心；grow up長大；take responsibility for為…負(fù)責(zé)任；talk about談?wù)撃�；get on with和…相處等

解答 答案：
I don't like my parents．（父母的表現(xiàn)）They always tell me I should do this，and should not do that．It sometimes makes me angry，“said Zhang Hua，a middle school student．Almost every teenager have the same question．Why？
（原因）One of the biggest things is when someone becomes a parent，he/she likes worrying things．They worry about everything about you，from the time you were born．All these things are part of your life．They want you to grow up healthily and happily．
So how can you make things easier on yourself？（建議）Just make sure your parents know what you're doing．Get them to know your friends．Phone if you stay somewhere else so that your parents don't call every hospital in the phone book looking for your body．Say sorry to them when you make mistakes．Take responsibility for what you have done．Talk about your ideas with them．
Most of all，try to think about why your parents do this or do that．Someday，when you become a parent，they may be able to help you how to get on with your children．（總結(jié)全文）

點評 用詞要恰當(dāng)，不可逐句把提示翻譯成英語．寫作時，應(yīng)盡量選用你最熟悉、最有把握的詞和句型來表達(dá)思想．如果有些單詞不會寫，有些句型不會表達(dá)，可以設(shè)法繞開，用熟悉的同義詞、同義短語或同義句來代替．要學(xué)會善于運用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞，利用祈使句，情態(tài)動詞表示建議等，以使作文行文邏輯緊密，自然流暢．．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩．